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flowers - pretty petals as I plucketh them and lay them out across the floor
the wind doth blow and scatter them over the fields - up to your door
my blood hath drained from thy visage when I doth heard the tragic news
that we would never be together - heart betrayed condemned to lose

he loves me so he loves me not, the blood like petals scarlet red
that witch betrothed to marry him instead of me I wish her dead.
and it be so for when the morrow dies I'll walketh up upon his bed
I'll wake him up and watch his face as I present her head.

~*~

Condemned to marry whatever fool thy parents see is fit
I take up needle yarn and thread a noose begins to knit
for if our love will never be - I think my heart should burst
I'll hang myself or I'll hang her - whichever happens first.

life and death - decisions to toy with - blissful scarlet dreams oh yes!
which to curse and which to bless? This of course is yours to guess
message to blame my message is first - my noose for her untimely death
is done at last - I yearn to listen as she gasps her final breath.

~*~

I invite her over for tea time - the crockery immaculately set
She sips her drug and as I watch she slips into sleeps blissful net
I drag her up o'er olympus peak - one nameth so after Zeus
I put my needles in my hair and to thus tree I fix thy noose

I prop her up opon thy branch - solidify thy heart
Push her off o'er thy branch - she doth awaken with a start
she screams so shrill that far below she doth turn up much fans
and one amongst those - rightly so - appears to be our man!

~*~

amidst my shock I bend too far and plummet off o'er the edge
of this named peak I try to grab a hold as I slip off the ledge
I barrel into thy doomed lover my death has proved its best
for as my head is cushioned by his shock my needles pierce his breast..

And so they bury us - us both women placed with him on either side
A love shared yes - by both of us- and jealousy none could ever hide
A love turned sour to extent it doth begins to smell
and scarlet roses do entice our love wars on in hell.

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Comments

Subject:
This is very rhythmic and it

This is very rhythmic and it also rhymes!! Wow! Your words flow so gracefully! I'm so jealous! :P Teach me!!

 Xay Ly (aka XayberOptix)
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xayberoptix
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June 25, 2010
Subject:
one key to poetry is - read

one key to poetry is - read each of my lines and count the syllables - they're all roughly the same length - it appears to be a standard length that the mind is comfortable with. As for rhyming I don't know - I find it fairly easy..

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Chronamut
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June 25, 2010
Subject:
Unbelievably amazing!

I've never known anyone who could make such an amazing poem. I usually don't read poetry, but this has inspired me to read more. You are incredibly talented, both with your skill and your style! I'm loving the Old English. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. :)

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June 25, 2010
Subject:
Thank you!

wow thank you!

Sadly it's the only one I've ever done in old english - but perhaps I shall do more! :)

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Chronamut
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June 25, 2010
Subject:
Great Poem

Great poem, I am not much of a writer but I love to read poetry. Did a lot of writing poems in English class, this is actually encouraging to make me want to start writing again. Maybe someday I will write a poetry book and publish it. =)

BabyDoll004
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July 25, 2010
Subject:
Awesome! Tbh I never thought

Awesome! Tbh I never thought my stuff would inspire ANYONE- let alone anyone wold actually read it - a lot of my poems have sat in obscurity for years and years, nobody even knowing they exist.. I used to write them when I was depressed or angry, so a lot of my poems have a darkness to them that I fear drives a lot of people away from them - so it's interesting that people seem to like this one..

if you ever publish it let me know.

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Chronamut
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July 25, 2010