2010, June 29 - 9:29am
I'll go first - see if you can interpret my poem - Cycles of Eternity:
http://fwunk.com/content/cycles-eternity
that was always something I enjoyed in school - taking poetry you were studying and trying to gauge the inner meaning.. poetry isn't usually just a bunch of pretty liens that rhyme- no - true poetry has meaning hidden within it.
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First paragraph: you're basically saying that you feel an energy surge through you while you're dreaming a quite unusual dream where everything seems so surrealistic and in slow motion.
Second paragraph: inspiration is exploding from everywhere throughout the universe and from it comes the perfection of life.
Third paragraph: the light is the fuel that sparks the knowledge that flows all up inside your head and gives you insight to new ideas.
Fourth paragraph: everything is moving and evolving as they touch on all of the human senses that the gods have created for mankind so that they are filled with a diverse mentality.
Fifth paragraph: the universe grows endlessly until one day it dies causing everything to start all over again.
So, tell me, how did I do?