Those are luscious strings! Although it is a good piece, I have some constructive criticism for you... The echoing on the piano is a bit much especially as it sounds like a lot of the other instruments are also echoing in the same manner. I notice the entire piece sounds like it is getting washed out with an excessive amount of reverb making it lack definition. But then maybe that's done intensionally for some artistic reason. To me, it just sounds all mushy. Anyway, this is just my opinion. Keep up the great work!

yeah it does sound like that a bit - the key was to make it sound wide and ambiantish.. ah well. I still like it - thanks for the constructiveness though :)

When I listen to this I feel refreshed. Like walking on the beach breathing in the morning air. Great work guys. If I were to give you come constructive critisism, I would say that the song kind of need a hook or a better one. something that will make me remember the song. I would add another melody line in there somewhere. Right now it's nice but not breath taking.

which is good enough for me- but I get what you are saying :)